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Forgotten in the rapid wind
The blue jay lost his trill,
And a thousand flakes of winter
Instead our memories fill.
Not a single note of solitude
Has passed across our minds,
Yet alone in the flurrying blizzard
Lonliness we find.
The trees provide scarce company
The flowers been put to rest,
And the opressing chill of winter
Has silenced the travelers' request.
No steps of faith have left
Daring footprints in the snow,
And underneath the ice,
A river has yet to flow.
The window pane has cracked,
Frost gathers at the split.
Between inside and out,
The curtain has been ripped.
It seems the sun shall never rise
Again her weary head.
Defeated by the paralyzing chill,
Winter's reign will never end.
:iconclementine-tangerine:

Author's Comments

hmm a rather old poem

8th grade i believe.
i was in a rather involved affair with Emily Dickinson at th time...its rather noticeable.

oh and dont ask why audrey hepburn is the preview image.
i just like that picture. and audrey too, of course.

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Hey, I like winter, I get to go snowboarding, anyway:

you wrote this in eigth grade?! Its better than most the stuff I've read written by seniors, and its way better than anything I've ever written. great job, however late that may be.

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One day midgets will rule the world... and I shall be their leader!
:iconclementine-tangerine:
thanks so much!

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The function of the artist is to provide what life does not.
:iconsauroman:
When I read this I feel like Audery looks, I can't believe that you don't write more! Such talent sitting idle, waiting for inspiration to hold out its hand and brush away the mold and mildew.

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I could be bounded in a nutshell and count myself a king of infinite space.
:iconclementine-tangerine:
hmm well if that commment is any indication,
i can't believe YOU don't write more!!

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The function of the artist is to provide what life does not.
:iconsauroman:
I can't write. I only rearrange words like I do shapes or notes until I like what becomes of it.

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I could be bounded in a nutshell and count myself a king of infinite space.
:iconfhqwgads7:
hey! i remember this one.
everyone loved it in the lit mag
but im pretty sure you thought it was bad
what a silly
fuzzy munky
goose.
....................................=D bye m'dear
:iconclementine-tangerine:
hah wow...i reallllly need to change my email.


I LOVE YOU.
my lil hoover lips....
thas how i like it.

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The function of the artist is to provide what life does not.
:iconnightmuse:
I didn't know you were a poet too! Yay! I thought maybe i was the only one on deviant art... you have such a nice, flowing style... i like it much!

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~*~Reality is only just a word~*~
---- Harry Chapin

Co-founder of the Marinara Liberation Front!: "Free the Marinara!"
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Burfafin, Just Burfafin. I love Winter

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